A practical cold email system: targeting, offer positioning, two high-performing templates, and a follow-up sequence designed to earn replies without sounding templated.
Quick start: a cold email sequence that is simple and effective
If you only do one thing, do this:
1) Send a short first email that proves you understand their situation and makes one specific ask.
2) Follow up 3 times with new information (not “bumping this”).
3) Stop after the breakup email.
Cold email works when the offer is strong and the list is right. Copy is third.
Step 1: Get targeting right (the hidden lever)
Reply rates collapse when your list is too broad. A useful ICP definition includes:
- who buys (role + company type)
- why they buy (a real pain, not a vague desire)
- when they buy (a trigger you can observe)
Triggers you can use without guessing: hiring, new funding, product launches, new locations, new leadership, and clear website changes (pricing, new pages).
Quality bar checklist (before you send)
Before adding a contact to your list, confirm:
- Company fits your ICP (industry, size, tech stack, or whatever matters)
- Contact is the right role (decision-maker or strong influencer)
- You can find a real reason to reach out (trigger or specific observation)
- Email is verified (not a guess or catch-all)
If you can't check all four, the contact probably shouldn't be on your list. A smaller, tighter list always beats a large, loose one.
Personalization tiers (a simple decision tree)
Not every contact needs deep research. Use this to decide how much effort to invest:
Tier 1 (high priority): Large deal size, strong ICP fit, or clear trigger. Spend 5–10 minutes researching. Write a custom first line based on something specific (their content, a recent move, a clear problem signal).
Tier 2 (medium priority): Good fit, no obvious trigger. Use a semi-custom opening based on their role or company type. Research takes 1–2 minutes.
Tier 3 (lower priority): Broad fit, testing a new segment. Use a templated approach with dynamic fields (company name, industry). No deep research.
The goal is to match effort to expected return. Don't write custom emails for low-probability contacts, and don't send generic templates to your best prospects.
Step 2: Write the email like a human (short, specific, earned)
Your first email should fit on a phone screen. Aim for 60–120 words.
Template A: Observation + value + one ask
Subject: quick question about {Company}
Hi {First name},
Noticed {specific observation tied to a likely problem}. When that happens, teams often run into {specific consequence}.
We’ve helped {similar company type} reduce {cost/risk} by {high-level approach}.
Worth a quick 15-minute call to see if this applies to {Company}?
Best,
Unilead Team
Template B: Trigger-based (why now)
Subject: congrats on {trigger}
Hi {First name},
Saw {Company} {trigger}. Usually that means {new priority} becomes important quickly.
If you’re working on {priority}, we can share a simple playbook we use to get to {outcome} without burning budget.
Open to a short call this week?
Best,
Unilead Team
Variation: “Send examples” CTA (lower friction)
If “book a call” feels too heavy, change the CTA:
“If helpful, I can send 2–3 examples of how we approached this for similar teams. Want me to?”
Step 3: Follow up with new value (not pressure)
Here’s a simple cadence:
- Follow-up #1 (Day 3): add one relevant insight or a short observation about their current setup.
- Follow-up #2 (Day 7): share one example (result, timeframe, what changed).
- Follow-up #3 (Day 10): breakup email that closes the loop politely.
The key is that each follow-up introduces new information, not “checking in”.
Deliverability minimums (keep this simple)
If you’re landing in spam, nothing else matters. Minimum baseline:
- SPF + DKIM + DMARC configured
- warm up new sending domains gradually
- keep daily volume reasonable per inbox
- avoid heavy HTML and attachments in the first touch
Next step
If you want, we can help you define your ICP, build a clean list, and write a sequence that matches your offer. Contact us.